Oldman's Poetry Corner™: Vibrant Fire

Thursday, April 1, 2010

Vibrant Fire

Vibrant Fire
by Brian Russell

Branches flaming hot
Alive you crackle and glow
Soothing weary souls

9 Sharing Comments:

Linda Menesez said...: Hi Brian,

I'm always amazed at how much can be said with so few words in Haiku poetry. Great job! I can almost feel the warmth of that fire!

Linda; April 1, 2010 at 12:28 PM
Brian the old man said...: Thanks Linda, I appreciate your praise. Have a great weekend!; April 1, 2010 at 12:35 PM
Anonymous said...: Hey B, a perfect poem. I do believe you found your calling. This is so well written, and in so few words it speaks volumes. Absolutely riviting.!!
Patty; April 1, 2010 at 1:35 PM
Brian the old man said...: Thanks Patty, I really do value your opinion since you are published poet. Thanks again!; April 1, 2010 at 1:47 PM
Michelle said...: I expected a totally different kind of poem and was so pleasantly surprised! Thank you so much!; April 1, 2010 at 9:04 PM
Brian the old man said...: Thanks Michelle, I appreciate your kind words. Happy Easter!; April 1, 2010 at 9:50 PM
Perry said...: I was surprised by how short is was to be honest with you,but I like it.What's Haiku B?I don't know how to use Google.lol.Happy Easter buddy!; April 2, 2010 at 8:30 PM
Brian the old man said...: Thanks Perry, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Let's see, Haiku is a three line poem usually about something in nature and contains 5 syllables the 1st and last lines and 7 syllables in the middle. I figured I would save you the pain staking trouble to learn how to use Google. LOL. Happy Easter! Hope you enjoy your weekend!; April 2, 2010 at 8:51 PM
Perry said...: OK thanks Brian.I understand now! :-); April 3, 2010 at 9:18 AM

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